nice
i was close to givin you 9 pts.
but the thing that kept me from the 9 was the missing sound FX. hell, man, you messed up your own movie by not implementing FX. do it next time. sound makes up for 50 (if not more) percent of an animation.
also i noticed that in the beginning the subtitles were changing somewhat too fast.
congrats on your drawings and the animation - style, style, style. rocked everything!
good luck with the next episode. you are very talented.